001.[Childhood]

[Childhood] When I was child, I was sick. so my parents worried about me. I was weak. So, they was eyes when I could' t see. they was voice when I could' t speak. Nowadays, I am healthy through their aid.

Hi Min, Great job, today. Here are the corrections and I wrote a summary below. Hope it helps. Take care and stay safe, Connie [Childhood]When I was child, I was sick. >> Correct so my parents worried about me. >> So my parents are really worried about me.I was weak. >> CorrectSo, they was eyes when I could' t see. >> I have eyes but I couldn’t see.they was voice when I could' t speak. >> I have a voice but I couldn’t speak.Nowadays, I am healthy through their aid. >> Correct.   Summary: When I was a child, I was so weak and really very sick. I can’t see and talk. My parents are worried about me so much that they did everything to make me well. Now, I’m glad that I’m healthy through their aid. I’m very lucky to have caring parents like them.