002.[Weekend]

2010-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

[Weekend] I usually go to my parent house twice a month. actually my parent manages the oil station. so I help my parent's works. If I will go to my parents house, they will go to travel. the other day, when I don't go my parents house, I usually meet my girl friend. and we have enjoyable time together.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   Your weekend sounds great… You told me that your weekend has always been the same but I can tell that you enjoy it… ^_^ See you in class!!   T. Shy   I usually go to my parent house twice a month >> CORRECT actually my parent manages the oil station >> Actually my parents manage the oil station so I help my parent's works. >> So I help my parent's work. If I will go to my parents house, they will go to travel. >> If I will go to my parents’ house, they will go to travel. the other day, when I don't go my parents house, I usually meet my girl friend. and we have enjoyable time together. >> The other day, when I didn’t go to my parents’ house, I met my girlfriend and we had an enjoyable time together.

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