002.[Weekend]
학생이 쓴 원문
[Weekend]
I usually go to my parent house twice a month. actually my parent manages the oil station. so I help my parent's works. If I will go to my parents house, they will go to travel. the other day, when I don't go my parents house, I usually meet my girl friend. and we have enjoyable time together.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Your weekend sounds great… You told me that your weekend has always been the same but I can tell that you enjoy it… ^_^
See you in class!!
T. Shy
I usually go to my parent house twice a month
>> CORRECT
actually my parent manages the oil station
>> Actually my parents manage the oil station
so I help my parent's works.
>> So I help my parent's work.
If I will go to my parents house, they will go to travel.
>> If I will go to my parents’ house, they will go to travel.
the other day, when I don't go my parents house, I usually meet my girl friend. and we have enjoyable time together.
>> The other day, when I didn’t go to my parents’ house, I met my girlfriend and we had an enjoyable time together.
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