004.[Company History]
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004.[Company History]
As I told you before, I works as part time job in national oil company.
so I don't know my company history very well.
But I will explain for you as I know all thing.
my company was established in 1983 as government company in seoul, korea.
and my branch was founded in 2005 at Seosan.
We are big oil storage company in the world.
nowaday, we explore for oil in Canada, Iraq, Vietnam and so on.
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Hi [이름]!
I hope your part time job will go full time. That is.. if you want it to be full time.
You told me you were looking for another job right? What are you really interested in doing anyway?
As I told you before, I works as part time job in national oil company.>>As I told you before, I am working part time in a national oil company.
so I don't know my company history very well.>>so I don't know my company's history very well.
But I will explain for you as I know all thing.>>But I will tell you as I get to know all about the company.
my company was established in 1983 as government company in seoul, korea.>>My company was established in 1983 as a government company in Seoul, Korea
and my branch was founded in 2005 at Seosan.>>correct
We are big oil storage company in the world.>>We are one of the biggest oil storage company in the world.
nowaday, we explore for oil in Canada, Iraq, Vietnam and so on.
>>we now do oil business with Canada, Iraq, Vietnam and so on.
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