005.[Workplace]

005.[Workplace] I work in Petro-chemical Industrial Complex. So, there are many factory around my storage base. and there are many factory chimney. I can see also a lot of car which parked in front of complex. when I open my office window, I can see a lot of Oil tank on the ground.

Hi [이름]!!   This is a good composition.. There were few errors that you have to take note of..^^ How about you write something about this topic for me: “What is the difference between the city and the country side?” See you in class!!!   T. Shy   So, there are many factory around my storage base. and there are many factory chimney. >> So, there are many factories around my storage base and there are many factory chimneys. I can see also a lot of car which parked in front of complex.>> I can see also a lot of cars which are parked in front of the complex. when I open my office window, I can see a lot of Oil tank on the ground. >> When I open my office window, I can see a lot of Oil tanks on the ground. >> When I open my office window, I can see a lot of Oil tanks below