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006.[Equipment] We have computer, fax-machine, copy machine, printer and so on. they help me to work more efficiently. among them, I like computer system. I have a good skill about the Excel, Word, Power Point. I think that the Excel is most powerful tool in the whole world.

Good day Min, I’m glad to see your composition today. You've included the key words and that's a great point. I revised some sentences. Here are the corrections: Stay safe, See you in class Connie   006.[Equipment]We have computer, fax-machine, copy machine, printer and so on. >> As a product of our technology, we have a lot of equipments nowadays. We have computers, fax-machines, Xerox machines, printers and the like.they help me to work more efficiently. >> These equipments help many people including me to work efficiently.among them, I like computer system. I have a good skill about the Excel, Word, Power Point. >> Above all, I like the computer. I have gook skills operating Excel, Word, and PowerPoint. I think that the Excel is most powerful tool in the whole world.V >> For me, Excel is the most powerful tool I could consider in the whole world.   SUMMARY: EQUIPMENTS:   As a product of our technology, we have a lot of equipments nowadays. We have computers, fax-machines, Xerox machines, printers and the like. These equipments help many people including me to work efficiently. Above all, I like the computer. I have gook skills operating Excel, Word, and PowerPoint. For me, Excel is the most powerful tool I could consider in the whole world.