007.[Work]

2010-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I am working part time in a national oil company. it is seems like a internship program. so, I work all day on week. indeed, I don't need high responsibility for work. but, I always try to all my best. my work is over around 6PM I never take a night work. Everyday, I will work very hard whether I don't be hired or not.

강사 첨삭

Hi Min, Great idea, working is not only for the company you are working for but it is also a self satisfaction. Continue to be OPTIMISTIC. Stay safe and enjoy the weekend, Connie   I am working part time in a national oil company. >> Presently, I’m working as a part time employee in a national oil company.it is seems like a internship program. >> It is like an internship program.so, I work all day on week. >> So, I work all day in a week.indeed, I don't need high responsibility for work. >> I don’t have a high responsibility for my work, but I always try my best. but, I always try to all my best.my work is over around 6PM >> My work ends at around 6 o’clock PM.I never take a night work. >> I never took a night shift.Everyday, I will work very hard whether I don't be hired or not. >> Everyday, I will work very hard whether I will be hired or not.   Sample answer:   Everyone wants to work in a prestigious company that is also what I wish for. Presently, I’m working as a part time employee in a national oil company. It is like an internship program.   So, I work all day in a week. I don’t have a high responsibility for my work, but I always try my best.  My work ends at around 6 o’clock PM.  I never took a night shift. Everyday, I will work very hard whether I will be hired or not.  I believe that at the end of the sacrifices is the sweet harvest I am to take.

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