008.[Mainly do at work]
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't have much work o deal.
because, I am a intern. but I have a big responsibility.
so, I work very hard, and learning hardly.
i'm charge of security & protection our base
but it's not hard to me, I just support my boss.
I must protect our base whether Bad guy will strike our base or not.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Wow, you do have a very tough job in the company…
You are in charge of the safety of your base so you must be very strong and brave…
Anyway, just always take care of yourself ok?
See you on Monday!!
T. Shy
I don't have much work o deal.>> I don't have much work to deal with
because, I am a intern. but I have a big responsibility.
>> because I am an intern but I have a big responsibility.
so, I work very hard, and learning hardly.>> So, I work very hard and I study very hardly. i'm charge of security & protection our base>> I’m in charge of the security & protection of our base
but it's not hard to me, I just support my boss.>> but it's not hard for me, I just support my boss.I must protect our base whether Bad guy will strike our base or not.
>> I must protect our base from bad guys who will strike on our base.
>> I must protect our base whether a bad guy will strike on our base or not.
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