009.[Project]

2010-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 kate

학생이 쓴 원문

The project that I was working was role play drama in university. a part of my job for the project was sound & light director I made a good effective sound. we had completed our drama project. I enjoyed that project whether we don't play our performance or not.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wow I am really impressed that you can actually be a part of working on a role play!  You should tell me about it in class!       The project that I was working was role play drama in university. >>The project that I was working on was a role play drama in a university. a part of my job for the project was sound & light director>>I am the sound and light director in this project. I made a good effective sound.>>I made a good sound effect we had completed our drama project.>>We completed our drama project. I enjoyed that project whether we don't play our performance or not. >>I enjoyed the project whether we play our performance or not.

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