009.[Project]
학생이 쓴 원문
The project that I was working was role play drama in university.
a part of my job for the project was sound & light director
I made a good effective sound.
we had completed our drama project.
I enjoyed that project whether we don't play our performance or not.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow I am really impressed that you can actually be a part of working on a role play!
You should tell me about it in class!
The project that I was working was role play drama in university.
>>The project that I was working on was a role play drama in a university.
a part of my job for the project was sound & light director>>I am the sound and light director in this project.
I made a good effective sound.>>I made a good sound effect
we had completed our drama project.>>We completed our drama project.
I enjoyed that project whether we don't play our performance or not.
>>I enjoyed the project whether we play our performance or not.
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