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Hi Teacher Alice!! Happy new year !! And I wish you to be great mother, wife and teacher like last year. Haha. How was your long holiday? I'm not sure two days were long period but these must be good and enough time on weekdays. I went to E-mart around my wife's house on Jan. 1st. Normaly, our family go to E-mart in the morning every holiday and enjoy shopping. After shopping, we took a drive without any destination for killing our time. ^^ When we had taken a drive, we found the big shopping mall. It was a fortune to us because we had a plan buying our baby's clothes. Anyway, we parked our car and started looking for some clothes. After 20 minutes, we found the good cloth for my baby and took my wife's wallet. At that time, my wife said 'Oh my god~~' because she left her wallet at her house. ㅡㅡ So we will visit to the shopping mall on this holiday again. ^^ See you on our class!!!

Happy New Year, too, Sir [이름]! ^^ How has your 2014 been? How did you celebrate new year Sir? I am happy to know you were able to buy nice clothes for your baby. It\'s perfect for new year!^^   Thank you for sending your composition to me^^ I made some corrections. I hope I was able to meet all your points. If you have some questions, just ask me in our class^^ Anyway, let\'s talk more about this in our class^^ Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Alice^^ Hi Teacher Alice!! >>CORRECT^^Happy new year !! And I wish you to be great mother, wife and teacher like last year. >>Happy new year!! I wish you\'d be a great mother, a wife and a teacher like last year.Haha. >>CORRECT^^How was your long holiday? >>CORRECT^^ I\'m not sure two days were long period but these must be good and enough time on weekdays. >>I\'m not sure if two days is a long period but it must be good enough for weekdays.I went to E-mart around my wife\'s house on Jan. 1st. >> [I went to E-mart, which is close to my wife\'s house on Jan.1st.] Normaly, our family go to E-mart in the morning every holiday and enjoy shopping. >>CORRECT^^ [normally]After shopping, we took a drive without any destination for killing our time. ^^ >>After shopping, we took a drive without any destination to kill some time.^^When we had taken a drive, we found the big shopping mall. >>When we took a drive, we found a big shopping mall. It was a fortune to us because we had a plan buying our baby\'s clothes. >>It was fortunate of us because we are planning to buy clothes for our baby.Anyway, we parked our car and started looking for some clothes. >>CORRECT^^After 20 minutes, we found the good cloth for my baby and took my wife\'s wallet. >>After 20 minutes, we found a good cloth for my baby and I took my wife\'s wallet.At that time, my wife said \'Oh my god~~\' because she left her wallet at her house. >>At that time, my wife said \"Oh my God\" because she left her wallet at home.ㅡㅡ So we will visit to the shopping mall on this holiday again. ^^ >>So we will visit the shopping mall this coming holiday again.^^See you on our class!!! >>correct^^