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2014-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Good evening! I am on my way to Paju city by the train. Haha.. my new year' resolurion? Well... As we conversated yesterday, there is nothing special for the new year. I have a goal rather than a resolution. I am wrting my essay wirh my smart phone, so it is a little inconvenient.ㅜㅜ Anyway, you already know my goal for this year about Toeic.^^ And my wife will move to Pusan in spring probably so I hope all circumstances become smooth for moving. My last goal is to be a skillful person in speaking, wrting and listening in Engkush. That's why I am decreasing the time watching TV at home. When I wrote my homework, I could see the permitted quantity on our homepage. However, I can't confirm that now, so I stop writing.^^ See you in my class! Take care~!!

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]! Thank you for sending your write-up about your new year\'s resolution. I am hoping that you will achieve all these this year Sir. May you enjoy your weekend with your family! See you Monday! ~Teacher Alice Good evening! >> Correct! I am on my way to Paju city by the train. >> I\'m on the train going to Paju City. Haha.. my new year\' resolurion? Well... >> Correct! As we conversated yesterday, there is nothing special for the new year. >> As we have conversed yesterday, there is nothing special for the new year. I have a goal rather than a resolution. >> Correct! I am wrting my essay wirh my smart phone, so it is a little inconvenient. >> I am writing my essay with my smartphone, so it is a little inconvenient. Anyway, you already know my goal for this year about Toeic.^^ >> Anyway, you already know my goal for this year about TOEIC.^^ And my wife will move to Pusan in spring probably so I hope all circumstances become smooth for moving. >> And my wife will probably move to Pusan in spring so I hope all circumstances will move smoothly. My last goal is to be a skillful person in speaking, wrting and listening in Engkush. >> My last goal is to be skillful in speaking, writing and listening in English. >> My last goal is to be a skillful person in speaking, writing and listening in English. That\'s why I am decreasing the time watching TV at home. >> That\'s why, I am reducing my watching time on TV. When I wrote my homework, I could see the permitted quantity on our homepage. >> As I was writing my homework, I could see the available number of space on your homepage. However, I can\'t confirm that now, so I stop writing.^^ >> However, I can\'t confirm that now, so I stopped writing. See you in my class! Take care~!! >> Correct!

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