01/03
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening! I am on my way to Paju city by the train.
Haha.. my new year' resolurion? Well...
As we conversated yesterday, there is nothing special for the new year. I have a goal rather than a resolution. I am wrting my essay wirh my smart phone, so it is a little inconvenient.ㅜㅜ Anyway, you already know my goal for this year about Toeic.^^ And my wife will move to Pusan in spring probably so I hope all circumstances become smooth for moving. My last goal is to be a skillful person in speaking, wrting and listening in Engkush.
That's why I am decreasing the time watching TV at home.
When I wrote my homework, I could see the permitted quantity on our homepage. However, I can't confirm that now, so I stop writing.^^ See you in my class! Take care~!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
Thank you for sending your write-up about your new year\'s resolution.
I am hoping that you will achieve all these this year Sir.
May you enjoy your weekend with your family!
See you Monday!
~Teacher Alice
Good evening!
>> Correct!
I am on my way to Paju city by the train.
>> I\'m on the train going to Paju City. Haha.. my new year\' resolurion? Well...
>> Correct! As we conversated yesterday, there is nothing special for the new year.
>> As we have conversed yesterday, there is nothing special for the new year.
I have a goal rather than a resolution.
>> Correct!
I am wrting my essay wirh my smart phone, so it is a little inconvenient.
>> I am writing my essay with my smartphone, so it is a little inconvenient.
Anyway, you already know my goal for this year about Toeic.^^
>> Anyway, you already know my goal for this year about TOEIC.^^
And my wife will move to Pusan in spring probably so I hope all circumstances become smooth for moving.
>> And my wife will probably move to Pusan in spring so I hope all circumstances will move smoothly.
My last goal is to be a skillful person in speaking, wrting and listening in Engkush.
>> My last goal is to be skillful in speaking, writing and listening in English.
>> My last goal is to be a skillful person in speaking, writing and listening in English. That\'s why I am decreasing the time watching TV at home.
>> That\'s why, I am reducing my watching time on TV.
When I wrote my homework, I could see the permitted quantity on our homepage.
>> As I was writing my homework, I could see the available number of space on your homepage.
However, I can\'t confirm that now, so I stop writing.^^
>> However, I can\'t confirm that now, so I stopped writing.
See you in my class! Take care~!!
>> Correct!
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