01.03 homework

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1. I currently bought a brand new bike in the new strip mall. Because they offered 50% off the bill for opening event.

>> I bought a brand new bike in the new strip mall because they are currently offering 50% off the bill at the opening event.

 2. I am presently looking for a change in home. So i decided to redo the inside of our house.
>> I am presently thinking about changing the interior of my home so I decided to redecorate my house.

 3. Last summer vacation, i spent time at home. It was the most memorable experience ever.
You know We had a barbeque on terrace with my family.

>> I spent my time last summer vacation at home. It was my most memorable experience ever. You know, my family had a barbeque on the terrace.

 4. I took a final exam and finally, i passed the exam because i have studied hard. So i was exceedingly pleased with this result !
>> I took the final exam and finally passed it because I studied conscientiously so I was exceedingly pleased with this result!

 5. Whenever i had a leisure time, i usually go to a park in order to jog.
It is a best way to relieve stress and relax.
>> Whenever I have leisure time, I usually go to a park for a jog as it is one of the best ways to relieve stress and relax.

6. I am always busy working on the weekdays, so i used to have alone time on the weekends while listening to music or doing my chore.

>> I am always busy working on the weekdays that\'s why I  usually spend my alone time listening to music or doing my chores on the weekends.