01/06
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for your composition today. I am happy because English is very important to you. Keep it up!^^
Can\'t wait to hear your story. See you!
Teacher Alice^^
Hi Teacher Alice!!
>> Correct.
I feel a little headache because it\'s Monday probably.
>> I have a headache because it\'s Monday, probably.
And I arrived at 04:00 AM, so I didn\'t have enough time to sleep.
>> Correct^^
But It will get better tommorrow.
>> Correct [tomorrow]
>> But It will feel better tomorrow
As you know, I can go to bed after my duty.
>> Correct.
Of course, I will answer your call because I think our lesson is very important to me.
>> Correct.
Thus, I always try to have our lesson. ^^
>> Correct.
>> OR: I will always try to study our lesson.
How was your weekend and this Monday??
>> How\'s your day? How about your weekend?
My wife\'s cousins came to our house yesterday.
>> Correct.
They live in U.S because their father is American.
>> They live in the U.S because their father is American.
Anyway, I had booked a restaurant for them which is recommended by my wife and went to that restaurant.
>> Anyway, I made a reservation in a restaurant for them which was recommended by my wife and I went there.
Oh my God. It was a seafood restaurant but they said we don\'t eat any seafood. ㅡㅡ;
>> Oh my God, it was a seafood restaurant but they don\'t eat any seafood! ㅡㅡ;
Next story.......... in our class......... ^^
>> Correct.
Bye~~!!!
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