01/06
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher Alice!
It was a hard day on Monday. As you know, I had a headache yesterday.
Though I had a bad condition, I did my class with you and studying with my friend.
To study with my friend was finished at 22:10 O'clock.
I got some rest for refreshing my head and communicated with my wife until goint to bed.
Did you host the event for many talented youth? Wow, I thought that's a amazing event for your new year's event including them.
Houw did you make a wonderful plan? So who does a team win in their performance ?
Well.. my talents? Unfortunately, I think I don't any special talents but I have a average level in all fields. ^^
How talents do you have?
As you know, it will be a very busy day today but I'm happy to study. Haha.
Have a great day! See you~!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름],
Haha. It was really nice to host such an amazing event. I was able to discover new talents from the youth.
The team with total package won - the one with the most stunning voice, most notable original composition, and of course, the one with the greatest audience impact. I\'m glad I was only the host, not the one of the judges, hahaha!
Anyway, my talents include singing, dancing and drawing. :p
I hope you\'ll have your dinner first before you attend my class so you will have more energy. :)
Catch you later!
~Teacher Alice
Good morning, Teacher Alice!
>>CORRECTIt was a hard day on Monday. As you know, I had a headache yesterday.
>>Monday was a hard day for me since I had a headache yesterday.Though I had a bad condition, I did my class with you and studying with my friend.
>> Though I had a bad condition, I did my class with you and studied with my friend.
>> Although I had a bad condition, I studied with my friend and attended my class with you.To study with my friend was finished at 22:10 O\'clock.
>> My class was finished at 22:10.
>> I finished my class at 22:10.I got some rest for refreshing my head and communicated with my wife until goint to bed.
>> I refreshed myself by getting some rest then I talked with my wife until I went to bed. Did you host the event for many talented youth? Wow, I thought that\'s a amazing event for your new year\'s event including them.
>> Did you host the talent show for the talented youth? Wow! That\'s an amazing event for you during the new year.Houw did you make a wonderful plan? So who does a team win in their performance ?
>> How did you plan for it? So, what team won during the competition?Well.. my talents? Unfortunately, I think I don\'t any special talents but I have a average level in all fields. ^^
>> Well, if you would ask about my talent, unfortunately, I don\'t have any special talents but I have an average level in all fields. How talents do you have?
>> How about your talents?
>> What are your talents?As you know, it will be a very busy day today but I\'m happy to study. Haha.>> Today would be a busy day for me but I\'m happy to study.
Have a great day! See you~!!
>> CORRECT
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