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2014-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Good morning, Teacher Alice! It was a hard day on Monday. As you know, I had a headache yesterday. Though I had a bad condition, I did my class with you and studying with my friend. To study with my friend was finished at 22:10 O'clock. I got some rest for refreshing my head and communicated with my wife until goint to bed. Did you host the event for many talented youth? Wow, I thought that's a amazing event for your new year's event including them. Houw did you make a wonderful plan? So who does a team win in their performance ? Well.. my talents? Unfortunately, I think I don't any special talents but I have a average level in all fields. ^^ How talents do you have? As you know, it will be a very busy day today but I'm happy to study. Haha. Have a great day! See you~!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름], Haha. It was really nice to host such an amazing event. I was able to discover new talents from the youth. The team with total package won - the one with the most stunning voice, most notable original composition, and of course, the one with the greatest audience impact. I\'m glad I was only the host, not the one of the judges, hahaha! Anyway, my talents include singing, dancing and drawing. :p I hope you\'ll have your dinner first before you attend my class so you will have more energy. :) Catch you later! ~Teacher Alice Good morning, Teacher Alice! >>CORRECTIt was a hard day on Monday. As you know, I had a headache yesterday. >>Monday was a hard day for me since I had a headache yesterday.Though I had a bad condition, I did my class with you and studying with my friend. >> Though I had a bad condition, I did my class with you and studied with my friend. >> Although I had a bad condition, I studied with my friend and attended my class with you.To study with my friend was finished at 22:10 O\'clock. >> My class was finished at 22:10. >> I finished my class at 22:10.I got some rest for refreshing my head and communicated with my wife until goint to bed. >> I refreshed myself by getting some rest then I talked with my wife until I went to bed. Did you host the event for many talented youth? Wow, I thought that\'s a amazing event for your new year\'s event including them. >> Did you host the talent show for the talented youth? Wow! That\'s an amazing event for you during the new year.Houw did you make a wonderful plan? So who does a team win in their performance ? >> How did you plan for it? So, what team won during the competition?Well.. my talents? Unfortunately, I think I don\'t any special talents but I have a average level in all fields. ^^ >> Well, if you would ask about my talent, unfortunately, I don\'t have any special talents but I have an average level in all fields. How talents do you have? >> How about your talents? >> What are your talents?As you know, it will be a very busy day today but I\'m happy to study. Haha.>> Today would be a busy day for me but I\'m happy to study. Have a great day! See you~!! >> CORRECT

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