01/07 Homework(Corrections to your comments)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Lia teacher. Yesterday, I briefly talked about how we play screen golf with my colleague. However, I think you misunderstood, so I\'ll correct it. Yesterday, seven people played the game, each playing individually. The first place winner wasn\'t charged for dinner, but the second through seventh places were split evenly. Second and third place were to pay 5% of the total, fourth and fifth 20%, and sixth and seventh 25%. So, I paid $4, which is 5% of the total. 90% of the total amount is a significant amount, so it is not a small burden for office workers. Anyway, I\'ll see you in class this evening.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름] thank you for writing such a detailed explanation. I really appreciate how clearly you described the situation and corrected the misunderstanding. You gave a long and thoughtful response, and that shows your effort to communicate accurately and responsibly in English. I truly appreciate that you take time to write longer homework responses and explain your thoughts carefully. Overall, your homework showed clarity, responsibility in communication, and good attention to detail. I enjoyed reading it and it gave me a much better understanding of the situation.
~ T. Lia
Hello, Lia teacher.
>> Hello, Teacher Lia.
Yesterday, I briefly talked about how we play screen golf with my colleague.
>> CORRECT
However, I think you misunderstood, so I\'ll correct it.
>> CORRECT
Yesterday, seven people played the game, each playing individually.
>> CORRECT
The first place winner wasn\'t charged for dinner, but the second through seventh places were split evenly.
>> The first-place winner wasn\'t charged for dinner, but the second through seventh places split the cost evenly.
Second and third place were to pay 5% of the total, fourth and fifth 20%, and sixth and seventh 25%.
>> CORRECT
So, I paid $4, which is 5% of the total.
>> CORRECT
90% of the total amount is a significant amount, so it is not a small burden for office workers.
>> CORRECT
Anyway, I\'ll see you in class this evening.
>> CORRECT
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