01.09 homework

2013-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

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Why is it necessary for everyone to know their history and cultural heritage? What do you think is the implication of not knowing? Even though I don't know about the Korean history and the heritage, the importance of knowing them is first thing in the morning because the history is the base of us. Because the history exists, we are now living and it is our pride which is worth introducing to foreigners. Also adapting solution of the past history to current situation is impossible, but it is meaningful to know our histiory and heritages. If someone don't know about their history, origin and ancestors, he won't feel the patriotism and the pride of their country.

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Hello there^^ I commend you in having some time for this composition. Kindly check the corrections below. You\'re right that we have to have a knowledge on history. Anyway, take care. See you in class. ~~ T. Kristel   Even though I don\'t know about the Korean history and the heritage, the importance of knowing them is first thing in the morningbecause the history is the base of us.>> Even though I don\'t know about the Korean history and heritage, the importance of knowing them is first thing in the morningbecause history is the basis of everything. >>OR Even though I don\'t know about the Korean history and heritage, the importance of knowing them is issential because history is the basis of everything.   Because the history exists, we are now living and it is our pride which is worthintroducing to foreigners. >>Because history exists, we are now living and it is our pride which is worthintroducing to foreigners. Also adapting solution of the past history to current situation is impossible, but it is meaningful to know our histiory and heritages.>> Also, adapting what had happened in the past history to current situation is impossible, but it is meaningful to know our history and heritage. If someone don\'t know about their history, origin and ancestors, he won\'t feel the patriotism and the pride of their country. >>If someone doesn\'t know about their history, origin and ancestors, he won\'t feel the patriotism and the pride of their country.

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