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학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher Alice~!
It is passing a half of weekdays. ^^
Aha~ Do you remember my favorite drama?
I'm not sure that I told you about that.
That drama, which was called 'Medical top team', was very funny and had a interesting story so I used to wait Wensday and Thursday. ^^
However, it was finished several weeks ago so I don't watch any drama nowadays.
^^ Do you have any enjoying drama? kk
I want to make a essay about your homework below. // If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how do you manage? What advice would you give someone who is very busy? //
Well.. If I have many things to do, I think which one is more important to first of all. Also, I think of the due date of each things to evaluate a priority.
And it is a little different according to repective persons.
Bye~~!!
강사 첨삭
Good day to you, Sir [이름]!
How are you feeling today?
Thank you for your composition. :)
I do have some corrections so I hope you go over them.
Enjoy this wonderful day!
~Teacher Alice
Good morning, Teacher Alice~!
>> Correct!It is passing a half of weekdays. ^^>>Half of the week has already passed. ^^Aha~ Do you remember my favorite drama?
>> Correct!I\'m not sure that I told you about that.
>>I\'m not sure if I told you about it.That drama, which was called \'Medical top team\', was very funny and had a interesting story so I used to wait Wensday and Thursday. ^^
>>It is entitled, \"Medical Top Team\". It was very funny and had an interesting story so I used to wait for it on Wednesdays and Thursdays. ^^However, it was finished several weeks ago so I don\'t watch any drama nowadays.>>However, it ended several weeks ago so I don\'t watch any dramas nowadays.^^ Do you have any enjoying drama? kk
>>Do you enjoy watching any dramas? ^^I want to make a essay about your homework below. //
>>I want to write an essay as it was in the homework.
If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how do you manage?
>>If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how will you manage them?
What advice would you give someone who is very busy? //
>> Correct!Well.. If I have many things to do, I think which one is more important to first of all.
>>Well, if I have many things to do, I will choose the most important.
Also, I think of the due date of each things to evaluate a priority.>>I will also consider the due date of each task to evaluate which my priority is.And it is a little different according to repective persons.
>>It will also be a little different according to each individual.Bye~~!! >> Correct!
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