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2014-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Good morning, Teacher Alice~! It is passing a half of weekdays. ^^ Aha~ Do you remember my favorite drama? I'm not sure that I told you about that. That drama, which was called 'Medical top team', was very funny and had a interesting story so I used to wait Wensday and Thursday. ^^ However, it was finished several weeks ago so I don't watch any drama nowadays. ^^ Do you have any enjoying drama? kk I want to make a essay about your homework below. // If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how do you manage? What advice would you give someone who is very busy? // Well.. If I have many things to do, I think which one is more important to first of all. Also, I think of the due date of each things to evaluate a priority. And it is a little different according to repective persons. Bye~~!!

강사 첨삭

Good day to you, Sir [이름]! How are you feeling today? Thank you for your composition. :) I do have some corrections so I hope you go over them. Enjoy this wonderful day! ~Teacher Alice  Good morning, Teacher Alice~! >> Correct!It is passing a half of weekdays. ^^>>Half of the week has already passed. ^^Aha~ Do you remember my favorite drama? >> Correct!I\'m not sure that I told you about that. >>I\'m not sure if I told you about it.That drama, which was called \'Medical top team\', was very funny and had a interesting story so I used to wait Wensday and Thursday. ^^ >>It is entitled, \"Medical Top Team\". It was very funny and had an interesting story so I used to wait for it on Wednesdays and Thursdays. ^^However, it was finished several weeks ago so I don\'t watch any drama nowadays.>>However, it ended several weeks ago so I don\'t watch any dramas nowadays.^^ Do you have any enjoying drama? kk >>Do you enjoy watching any dramas? ^^I want to make a essay about your homework below. // >>I want to write an essay as it was in the homework. If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how do you manage? >>If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how will you manage them? What advice would you give someone who is very busy? // >> Correct!Well.. If I have many things to do, I think which one is more important to first of all. >>Well, if I have many things to do, I will choose the most important. Also, I think of the due date of each things to evaluate a priority.>>I will also consider the due date of each task to evaluate which my priority is.And it is a little different according to repective persons. >>It will also be a little different according to each individual.Bye~~!! >> Correct! 

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