01-11
학생이 쓴 원문
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1. tuition fee
2. expected to
3. available
4. registered voter
5. election
1. Tuition fee of my university is insanely expensive concidering quality of classes.
>> The tuition fee in my university is unreasonable and insanely expensive considering the quality of classes.
2. I\'m expected to enter academy for VFX after graduating from my university.
>> I\'m expected to enter an academy to study VFX after graduating from my university.
3. Sorry, credit cards are not available.
>> We apologize but credit cards aren\'t available.
4. I\'m not a registered voter in Daegu.
>> correct
5. Everybody have given me speeches about \'how important election is\' but, I\'m not a registered voter in here.
>> Everyone has given me speeches about how important the an election is, but I\'m not a registered voter here.
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