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2014-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there Teacher Alice! I had a good time with my friends and had wonderful dinner. All foods were very delicious. After the dinner, we talked about time of our university while drinking a cup of coffee with some oranges for dessert. I came home around 22:30. ㅜㅜ So I didn't study Toeic yesterday. Also, I won't study Toeic because I should have dinner with my co-workers today. However, I will do after the dinner alone. Wow, you give me 3 wishes... Well.. I'm not sure what I ask you now. Because I don't know you give me this wonderful suggest in this mornimg(I saw this homework in the morning). Anyway, I am happy to just imagin about my wishes. Have a good day~! And see you............. on Wensday.. Maybe I can't answer your call, so I will postpone my class today. ^^ Bye~~!!

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday Sir [이름]! Thank you so much for sending in your composition today. I really appreciate it.^^ It only means that you are doing your best to study English. Anyway, have you thought of your wishes yet? Haha! Hope you share them in class soon! Keep safe!^^ ~Teacher Alice^^ Hi there Teacher Alice! >>CorrectI had a good time with my friends and had wonderful dinner. >>CorrectAll foods were very delicious. >>Correct [or simply FOOD - collective]^^ After the dinner, we talked about time of our university while drinking a cup of coffee with some oranges for dessert. >>After dinner, while drinking a cup of coffee with some oranges for desert, we talked about our university days.I came home around 22:30. ㅜㅜ So I didn\'t study Toeic yesterday. >>I came home at around 22:30 so I didn\'t study TOEIC yesterday. T.TAlso, I won\'t study Toeic because I should have dinner with my co-workers today. >>Correct [TOEIC]However, I will do after the dinner alone.>>Nevertheless, I will study alone after dinner.Wow, you give me 3 wishes... >>Correct Well.. I\'m not sure what I ask you now. >>Well, I\'m not sure what I will ask from you now.^^Because I don\'t know you give me this wonderful suggest in this mornimg(I saw this homework in the morning).>>_because I don\'t know that you gave me this wonderful suggestion this morning. [morning]Anyway, I am happy to just imagin about my wishes.>>Correct [imagine]Have a good day~! >>Correct And see you............. on Wensday.. >>And see you on Wednesday.^^Maybe I can\'t answer your call, so I will postpone my class today. ^^ >>CorrectBye~~!! >>Correct

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