01.14 Monday.
학생이 쓴 원문
In your personal opinion, do you think what the other passengers did to the drunk passenger was right? Justify your answer.
If the drunk passenger make a disturbance, he must be restricted because there are other passengers in the same area.
And the purpose to restrict the passenger is to minimize the damage to other passengers.
So, It is right to do something to repress the drunk passenger for other people.
And who did that is not an important thing in this kind of situation.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Julia!!!
A pleasant Wednesday~~
Thanks for answering your homework! This was a great expression of your ideas!
Keep up the good job my dear! Your sentences were all correctly constructed but I provided
alternative ways on how to express them too so you can also check them out! :)
Have a great day my dear! See you in class!
T.Kristel
In your personal opinion, do you think what the other passengers did to the drunk passenger was right? Justify your answer.If the drunk passenger make a disturbance, he must be restricted because there are other passengers in the same area.
>>CORRECT!!
>>or If the drunk passenger disturbs others, he must be restricted because there are other passengers in the same area.And the purpose to restrict the passenger is to minimize the damage to other passengers.
>>CORRECT!!
>>And the purpose of restricting the passenger is to minimize the damage to other passengers.So, It is right to do something to repress the drunk passenger for other people.
>>CORRECT!!
>> or So, it is right to do something to repress the drunk passenger for the sake of the other people.And who did that is not an important thing in this kind of situation.
>>CORRECT!!
>>And who did that is not the important thing in situations like this.
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