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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Tearcher Alice!
It's on Tursday. And tommorrow will be Sunday. ^^
So I hope to pass today quickly. I think that you are in same mind.
This is a good question about some mistakes in the past.
I wish to change what I joined to stock market and registered in some insurance to my friend.
I know that I can't return my decisions and any results from my decisions.
Honestly, I have suffered a great loss in the stock and the insurance.
Anyway, I already accepted all of outputs and tried to decrease additional loss.
There was a important thing that I learned from the loss.
It was that to decrese my loss is more important than to increase my profit.
^^
Have a nice day and see you~~!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework once again.
I also want to thank you for sharing your experience.
We all learn from our mistakes and I believe that you became a better person from this experience, right?^.^
Let\'s talk more about this in class.
See you then!
~Teacher Alice
Hi there Tearcher Alice!
>>Hi there, Teacher Alice!It\'s on Tursday. And tommorrow will be Sunday. ^^
>>It\'s Thursday(or Saturday?) and tomorrow will be Friday.So I hope to pass today quickly. I think that you are in same mind. >>So I hope this day passes quickly. I think you are thinking the same thing.^^This is a good question about some mistakes in the past.
>>Correct!I wish to change what I joined to stock market and registered in some insurance to my friend.
>>I wish to change the time when I joined the stock market and registered to some insurance from my friend.I know that I can\'t return my decisions and any results from my decisions.
>>I know I can\'t turn away my decisions and the results from them.Honestly, I have suffered a great loss in the stock and the insurance.
>>Correct!Anyway, I already accepted all of outputs and tried to decrease additional loss.
>>Anyway, I already accepted all of the outcome and tried to decrease the additional loss.There was a important thing that I learned from the loss.
>>There was an important thing that I learned from the loss.It was that to decrese my loss is more important than to increase my profit.
>>To decrease my loss is more important than to increase my profit.^^^^Have a nice day and see you~~!!
>>Correct!
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