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2014-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi there Tearcher Alice! It's on Tursday. And tommorrow will be Sunday. ^^ So I hope to pass today quickly. I think that you are in same mind. This is a good question about some mistakes in the past. I wish to change what I joined to stock market and registered in some insurance to my friend. I know that I can't return my decisions and any results from my decisions. Honestly, I have suffered a great loss in the stock and the insurance. Anyway, I already accepted all of outputs and tried to decrease additional loss. There was a important thing that I learned from the loss. It was that to decrese my loss is more important than to increase my profit. ^^ Have a nice day and see you~~!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework once again. I also want to thank you for sharing your experience. We all learn from our mistakes and I believe that you became a better person from this experience, right?^.^ Let\'s talk more about this in class. See you then! ~Teacher Alice Hi there Tearcher Alice! >>Hi there, Teacher Alice!It\'s on Tursday. And tommorrow will be Sunday. ^^ >>It\'s Thursday(or Saturday?) and tomorrow will be Friday.So I hope to pass today quickly. I think that you are in same mind. >>So I hope this day passes quickly. I think you are thinking the same thing.^^This is a good question about some mistakes in the past. >>Correct!I wish to change what I joined to stock market and registered in some insurance to my friend. >>I wish to change the time when I joined the stock market and registered to some insurance from my friend.I know that I can\'t return my decisions and any results from my decisions. >>I know I can\'t turn away my decisions and the results from them.Honestly, I have suffered a great loss in the stock and the insurance. >>Correct!Anyway, I already accepted all of outputs and tried to decrease additional loss. >>Anyway, I already accepted all of the outcome and tried to decrease the additional loss.There was a important thing that I learned from the loss. >>There was an important thing that I learned from the loss.It was that to decrese my loss is more important than to increase my profit. >>To decrease my loss is more important than to increase my profit.^^^^Have a nice day and see you~~!! >>Correct!

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