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2014-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi there! TGIF!! Please check my homework. 1.The soldiers are _based_ in Germany. 2 .We used _bat_ to stuff the quilt. 3 .A _batt_ hunts at night and is a mammal. 4 .I am happy to _be_ here. 5 .I never want to be stung by a _bee_. 6 . _Beech_ trees grown in warm climates. 7 . I love going to the _beach_ in the summer to be near the water. 8 ._Beat_ the drum loudly! 9 .I love the red color of a _beet_. 10 . My _beau_ took me to a movie last night. Oh no~~! I don't understand almost half of example words. Haha.. Please don't be disapppinted due to my results. ^^ I felt it is very difficult to communicate with you yesterday. However, it came from me, not you. Is it a slump? haha I'm not sure but I think it was a reasom that I had just arrived before our class. Honestly, I hope to think like that.. Lunch time was finished so I should get back to my work. ^^ See you~!

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Good day to you, Sir [이름]!^^ TGIF!^^I went over your work and I can say that you did a pretty fine job here!^^ Even though you mentioned that you didn\'t quite understand all the words below, you still got a pretty good score.^^If you have some clarifications, just raise them in class.May you continue to have a great time.^^ P.S. You did not really sound bad during our previous class, but I know that you can do a better job on our next class.^^ Hi there! TGIF!! >>CorrectPlease check my homework.>>Correct1.The soldiers are _based_ in Germany. >>Correct2 .We used _bat_ to stuff the quilt. >>batt3 .A _batt_ hunts at night and is a mammal. >>bat4 .I am happy to _be_ here. >>Correct5 .I never want to be stung by a _bee_. >>Correct6 . _Beech_ trees grown in warm climates. >>Correct7 . I love going to the _beach_ in the summer to be near the water. >>Correct8 ._Beat_ the drum loudly! >>Correct9 .I love the red color of a _beet_. >>Correct10 . My _beau_ took me to a movie last night. >>CorrectOh no~~! >>CorrectI don\'t understand almost half of example words. Haha.. >>I didn\'t understand almost half of the sample words.^^ Please don\'t be disapppinted due to my results. ^^ >>Please don\'t be disappointed due to the result of my homework.I felt it is very difficult to communicate with you yesterday. >>I felt like it was difficult for me to communicate with you yesterday.However, it came from me, not you. Is it a slump? haha >>Correct OR >> However, it was my fault.^^I\'m not sure but I think it was a reasom that I had just arrived before our class. >>I\'m not sure but I think the reason for this is I had just arrived/got in before our class.Honestly, I hope to think like that.. >>Correct OR >> Honestly, I just want to think it that way.Lunch time was finished so I should get back to my work. ^^ >>Lunch time is finished, so I should get back to work.^^See you~! >>Correct

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