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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
1.Sally (runs) to the park every day.
2.The dogs (bark) at strangers.
3.Ted and Mary (are) going to the movies.
4.The game (was) exciting.
5.They (worries) too much.
6.She (studies) every night.
7.Black or white (is) your choice.
8.That (was) incredible.
9.Those (are) pretty shoes.
10.The cat or dog (is) in the yard.
Good morning! How was your weekend? I had a good time with my family.
Of course, I went to E-mart and One mountain which is like a big shopping mall.
It is a little different from a department store but anyway we did a window shopping and had our lunch at Japanese cafeteria which had lunch before.
At this time, my wife and I gave an order that were different from our previous menu.
I don't assure that I can answer your call today because I may go to Andong city for visiting a funeral hall of my friend's father.
Anyway, I hope to talk with you. Bye!!
강사 첨삭
Good morning! Thank you for sending in your homework. Also, thank you for sharing your wonderful story with me. Your ideas just need to be cohesive. Don\'t worry, we\'ll work on that. Find some time to go over the corrections below.^^
Also, I\'ll still call you later if you aren\'t going to postpone our class.
Please send my condolences to your friend.
Take care and enjoy the rest of the day!
Hi there!>>Correct1.Sally (runs) to the park every day.
>>Correct!2.The dogs (bark) at strangers.
>>Correct!3.Ted and Mary (are) going to the movies.
>>Correct!4.The game (was) exciting.
>>Correct!5.They (worries) too much.
>>worry6.She (studies) every night.
>>Correct!7.Black or white (is) your choice.
>>Correct!8.That (was) incredible.
>>Correct!9.Those (are) pretty shoes.
>>Correct!10.The cat or dog (is) in the yard.>>Correct!Good morning!
>>Correct!
How was your weekend?
>>Correct
OR >> How did your weekend go?
I had a good time with my family.
>>Correct!
OR >> I had a blast with my family.
>> I had fun with my family.Of course, I went to E-mart and One mountain which is like a big shopping mall.
>>Of course, I went to E.mart and One Mountain which are like big shopping malls.It is a little different from a department store but anyway we did a window shopping and had our lunch at Japanese cafeteria which had lunch before.
>>It is a little different from a department store but we did window shopping and had lunch at a Japanese cafeteira where we had been before.At this time, my wife and I gave an order that were different from our previous menu.>>At this time, my wife and I ordered a different menu from the previous one.I don\'t assure that I can answer your call today because I may go to Andong city for visiting a funeral hall of my friend\'s father.>>I can\'t assure you that I will answer your call today because I may go to Andong city to attend the funeral of my friend\'s father.Anyway, I hope to talk with you.
>>Correct
Bye!!
>>Correct
OR >> Goodbye!
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