01-18
학생이 쓴 원문
1. debt
2. loan
3. pristine
4. business district
5. outperform
1. You\'d better pay off all your debts as soon as possible.
2. I\'ve taken out my students loan over 3 years.
3. It is pretty old but still looks pristine, right?
4. Busan bank is placed on a business district.
5. He overcame his challenging eyesight and outperformed other players at last game.
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. debt
2. loan
3. pristine
4. business district
5. outperform
1. You\'d better pay off all your debts as soon as possible.
>> correct
2. I\'ve taken out my students loan over 3 years.
>> I took out a student loan 3 years ago.
3. It is pretty old but still looks pristine, right?
>> correct
4. Busan bank is placed on a business district.
>> Busan Bank is located in the business district.
5. He overcame his challenging eyesight and outperformed other players at last game.
>> He overcame his poor eyesight and outperformed other players in the last game.
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