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2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. orphan / orphanage 2. both sides of a road 3. You have your whole life ahead of you. 4. manly / masculine 5. shelter 1. Sorry, our orphanage is hard to embrace another orphans. 2. There are so many parked cars on both sides of a road 3. *****Isn\'t it a completed sentence already? 4. Words that limit gender specificity should be avoided such as masculine, manly, girlish or femininity. 5. I\'m afraid to announce our last shelter has been damaged already. ps. I really want to share this with you. It is definitely one of my favorite memes lmao

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!
Jean



    1. orphan / orphanage
2. both sides of a road
3. You have your whole life ahead of you.
4. manly / masculine
5. shelter

1. Sorry, our orphanage is hard to embrace another orphans.

>> We apologize but our orphanage can\'t accommodate more orphans.

 2. There are so many parked cars on both sides of a road
>> There are so many cars parked on both sides of the road.

3. *****Isn\'t it a completed sentence already?
>> Yes, but I\'d like you to make a sentence using that expression. That is actually an idiomatic expression.


 4. Words that limit gender specificity should be avoided such as masculine, manly, girlish or femininity.
>> Using gender-inclusive language such as masculine, manly, girlish, or feminine should be avoided.


 5. I\'m afraid to announce our last shelter has been damaged already.

>> correct



 ps. I really want to share this with you.
It is definitely one of my favorite memes lmao

>> Where is it?^^

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