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2019-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. turn in 2. clarify 3. lucrative 4. thoroughly 5. frugal 1. He has truned countless petitions over a decade 2. To clarify this situation, she requested CCTV datas. 3. Video games market has been concidered as a lucrative market. 4. The party in last night was thoroughly successful. 5. For our next travel, we need to be frugal.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. turn in
2. clarify
3. lucrative
4. thoroughly
5. frugal

1. He has truned countless petitions over a decade

>> He has

2. To clarify this situation, she requested CCTV datas.
>> To clarify this situation, she requested for CCTV data.

>> [Data is the plural of the word datum. Example: We have a lot of data on the research. We need a datum on from you.]

3. Video games market has been concidered as a lucrative market.
>> Video games market has been considered as a lucrative market.

4. The party in last night was thoroughly successful.
>> The party last night was thoroughly successful.

5. For our next travel, we need to be frugal.

>> correct

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