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2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> What shopping tips do you consider when you shop? I think you cannot get useful shopping tips from me. This is because I love shopping with no plans but those are not splurging on. Maybe those are however that way of consumption at least makes me happy. So it seems to me, those are worth it though. To conclude, enjoy your shopping and throw your money on. That is all I have.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

>> What shopping tips do you consider when you shop?

I think you cannot get useful shopping tips from me.

>> correct

This is because I love shopping with no plans but those are not splurging on.

>> This is because I love shopping spontaneously, and I don\'t splurge.

Maybe those are however that way of consumption at least makes me happy.

>> I\'m happy with the way I shop or spend my money.

So it seems to me, those are worth it though.

>> correct

To conclude, enjoy your shopping and throw your money on.

>> To conclude, enjoy your shopping and spend your money on anything you want.

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