01 I am~
학생이 쓴 원문
I have experienced many awards in local art contests through watercolor painting and oil paintings thanks to the active guidance of art teachers through middle schools and high schools in rural areas.
I was impressed when I read Kandinsky's "Point and Line to Plane" books during high school arts and since then I have been interested in the world of non-conventional painting, I am going to make a goal to study the composition with the idea that I want to strengthen my design ability in my childhood greed When I entered college, I finally went to the department of interior design, not visual design. I was left with pure art, and while I was in college after various college entrance and art classes, I could not adjust myself as an interior design student.One day, while I was working alone in the classroom at the school one day, my supervisor approached me who was alone and instructed me about explanation of drawing work and expression of space. ~~~~~
강사 첨삭
I have experienced many awards in local art contests through watercolor painting and oil paintings thanks to the active guidance of art teachers through middle through middle schools and high schools in rural areas.
>> I have received many awards in local art contests doing watercolor painting and oil paintings, thanks to the active guidance of my art teachers in middle
school and high school.
I was impressed when I read Kandinsky\'s \"Point and Line to Plane\" books during high school arts and since then I have been interested in the world of non-conventional painting,
>> I was impressed when I read Kandinsky\'s \"Point and Line to Plane\" book in my high school art class and since then I have been interested in the world of non-conventional painting.
I am going to make a goal to study the composition with the idea that I want to strengthen my design ability in my childhood greed When I entered college,
>> I am going to set a goal and that is to study the composition with the idea to strengthen and develop my art talent which i selfishly like when i was in [이름] until i reached college.
I finally went to the department of interior design, not visual design. I was left with pure art, and while I was in college after various college entrance and art classes, I could not adjust myself as an interior design student.
>> I finally enrolled in an interior design class, not in a visual design class. I was left with pure art, after my various college entrances and art classes but I was having a hard time to adjust myself as an interior design student.
One day, while I was working alone in the classroom at the school one day, my supervisor approached me who was alone and instructed me about explanation of drawing work and expression of space. ~~~~~
>> One day, while I was working alone in the classroom at the school, my supervisor approached me and explained to me the drawing and the expression of space.
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