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I have been interested in Management & Computing since my childhood. I want to be a Good Team Leader & Computing Master.
My major is Business Management. Naturally, I took a lot of Computing Courses
Because I'm interested in computing. So, I can make a program. Until now, I am studying Android Platform Program[이름]g for Smart Phone.
I also took Quantitative Analysis Courses such as Liner Program[이름]g by a Lingo Tool. I worked in Samsung Electronic at Logistics Company as Intern when I'm in junior in university. I used to analysis in VOC(Voice of Customer) Database by Lingo.
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Hi [이름]!!
Wow, you were able to use very technical terms here and you used them well…
Congratulations!
I am interested to know more about this Android Platform Program[이름]g that you are talking about.. I hope you can tell me more…
See you in class!!
T. Shy
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My major is Business Management. Naturally, I took a lot of Computing Courses >> My major was Business Management. Naturally, I took a lot of Computing Courses I worked in Samsung Electronic at Logistics Company as Intern when I'm in junior in university>> I worked in Samsung Electronics at Logistics Company as an intern when I was a junior in the university
I used to analysis in VOC(Voice of Customer) Database by Lingo. >> I used to analyze VOC (Voice of Customer) Database by using Lingo.
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