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2019-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

I have three goals to do this year. This one is quit smoking and lose weight. I will certainly achieve to do it. Another goal is studying foreign languages. Of course, studying English is the first priority. I need to your much more help to achieve its. I always have been tinking appreciate you. I have to achieve it for my health. I\'m not good enough, so please help me. Thank you see you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! You missed our class today. But I hope that you will have a very good day today. ^^

Thanks for your effort in doing this homework. Please check the corrections below.

I may not be the best teacher but I am doing my best to teach and help you in your English.

Thank you so much for your patience. I appreciate it. ^^

~~May~~

I have three goals to do this year.

>> CORRECT

OR >> I have three goals to achieve this year.
 This one is quit smoking and lose weight. 

>> First is to quit smoking and second is to lose weight. 
I will certainly achieve to do it.

>> I will certainly achieve it.
 Another goal is studying foreign languages.

>> And my third goal is to study foreign languages.
 Of course, studying English is the first priority. 

>> Of course, studying English is my priority. 

 I need to your much more help to achieve its.

>> I need more of your help to achieve this.

I always have been tinking appreciate you.

>> I have been thinking to appreciate you.
 I have to achieve it for my health.

>> CORRECT
 I\'m not good enough, so please help me.

>> CORRECT
 Thank you see you.

>> Thank you and see you!

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