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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! You missed our class today. But I hope that you will have a very good day today. ^^
Thanks for your effort in doing this homework. Please check the corrections below.
I may not be the best teacher but I am doing my best to teach and help you in your English.
Thank you so much for your patience. I appreciate it. ^^
~~May~~
I have three goals to do this year.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I have three goals to achieve this year.
This one is quit smoking and lose weight.
>> First is to quit smoking and second is to lose weight.
I will certainly achieve to do it.
>> I will certainly achieve it.
Another goal is studying foreign languages.
>> And my third goal is to study foreign languages.
Of course, studying English is the first priority.
>> Of course, studying English is my priority.
I need to your much more help to achieve its.
>> I need more of your help to achieve this.
I always have been tinking appreciate you.
>> I have been thinking to appreciate you.
I have to achieve it for my health.
>> CORRECT
I\'m not good enough, so please help me.
>> CORRECT
Thank you see you.
>> Thank you and see you!
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