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The mouse is the animal that reperesents the year I was born in. In the Chinese astrology, the mouse is described as a tricky animal. In the race of \"Animal order\", it\'s obvious that the cow will win the race. But the mouse hung on the cow\'s horn. And the mouse won the game instead of the cow. I think the mouse was brilliant! The world only remembers the winner. Actually I couldn\'t remember the second winner of race so I researched it! But if I should participate in that kind of race, I wouldn\'t cheat because I will feel guilty. However, I agree that we often use something or someone for our success. Of course, through the positive and legal ways!
PS. Hi teacher! I was confused how to write down \"mouse\". I think we should put \"the\" when we say about specific things. But if we write proper noun, we don\'t use \"the\". I think the mouse in the story is proper noun. Could you explain for me?
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for this composition. Keep it up! Practice more and just enjoy whatever you are doing. ^_^ To answer your question regarding proper noun: a proper noun is the name given to something to make it more specific (e.g., Johnathan, Ollie, London, Monday). Proper nouns are written with capital letters regardless of where they appear in a sentence. Proper nouns contrast with common nouns, which are the words for something (e.g., boy, dog, city, day). Common nouns are written with a capital letter only when they start a sentence. A mouse is a common noun.
~T. Irene~
The mouse is the animal that represents the year I was born in.
>>>The mouse represents the year I was born in.
>>> I was born in the year of the mouse.
In the Chinese astrology, the mouse is described as a tricky animal.
>>> In Chinese astrology, the mouse is described as a tricky animal.
In the race of \"Animal order\", it\'s obvious that the cow will win the race.
>>> In the race for \"Animal order\", it\'s obvious that the cow will win the race.
But the mouse hung on the cow\'s horn.
>>> Correct.
And the mouse won the game instead of the cow.
>>> So the mouse won the game instead.
I think the mouse was brilliant!
>>> Correct.
The world only remembers the winner.
>>> Correct.
Actually I couldn\'t remember the second winner of race so I researched it!
>>> Actually I couldn\'t remember who got the second place in the race so I researched for it!
But if I should participate in that kind of race, I wouldn\'t cheat because I will feel guilty.
>>> Correct.
However, I agree that we often use something or someone for our success.
>>> Correct.
Of course, through the positive and legal ways!
>>> Correct.
PS. Hi teacher! I was confused how to write down \"mouse\".
>>> Correct.
I think we should put \"the\" when we say about specific things.
>>> I think we use \'the\' to refer to specific things.
But if we write proper noun, we don\'t use \"the\".
>>> But when we write proper nouns, we don\'t use \"the\".
I think the mouse in the story is proper noun.
>>> I think the mouse in the story is proper noun.
Could you explain for me?
>>> Could you explain it for me?
~T. Irene~
The mouse is the animal that represents the year I was born in.
>>>The mouse represents the year I was born in.
>>> I was born in the year of the mouse.
In the Chinese astrology, the mouse is described as a tricky animal.
>>> In Chinese astrology, the mouse is described as a tricky animal.
In the race of \"Animal order\", it\'s obvious that the cow will win the race.
>>> In the race for \"Animal order\", it\'s obvious that the cow will win the race.
But the mouse hung on the cow\'s horn.
>>> Correct.
And the mouse won the game instead of the cow.
>>> So the mouse won the game instead.
I think the mouse was brilliant!
>>> Correct.
The world only remembers the winner.
>>> Correct.
Actually I couldn\'t remember the second winner of race so I researched it!
>>> Actually I couldn\'t remember who got the second place in the race so I researched for it!
But if I should participate in that kind of race, I wouldn\'t cheat because I will feel guilty.
>>> Correct.
However, I agree that we often use something or someone for our success.
>>> Correct.
Of course, through the positive and legal ways!
>>> Correct.
PS. Hi teacher! I was confused how to write down \"mouse\".
>>> Correct.
I think we should put \"the\" when we say about specific things.
>>> I think we use \'the\' to refer to specific things.
But if we write proper noun, we don\'t use \"the\".
>>> But when we write proper nouns, we don\'t use \"the\".
I think the mouse in the story is proper noun.
>>> I think the mouse in the story is proper noun.
Could you explain for me?
>>> Could you explain it for me?
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