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Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I also hope that time machine
will be invented in the future. But I don\'t think it\'s possible. hehehe...
~~May~~
There is something that does not yet exist but i want to see invented.
>> There is something that does not yet exist but I want to see the inventions.
It is a Timemachine. Do you know that?
>> It is a Time Machine. Do you know why?
The reason why i thought is the movie in 1985
>> The reason why I thought about it is because of the movie that I watched in 1985.
The title of one is \"Back to the future\" It was released in 1985.
>> The title of the movie is \"Back to the Future\". It was released in 1985.
It was very innovative and impressive at the time.
>> It was very innovative and impressive at that time.
I remember that i have watched this movie four times.
>> Correct
I think i\'m sure no one has ever seen this one.
>> I think that no one had ever seen this movie.
So if it is invented, i want to go to the past and the future.
Because of i\'d like to correct the mistake of the past and i wonder how i live in the future.
>> So if it has invented, I want to go back in the past and go to future because I like to make things right.
I know that it is impossible in reality. But someday, i believe that it will have invented.
>> I know that it is impossible to happen, but I believe that it is possible to invent.
I wonder if i can live until then. Just i think.
>> I wonder if I am still living at that time.
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