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2019-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

There is something that does not yet exist but i want to see invented. It is a Timemachine. Do you know that? The reason why i thought is the movie in 1985 The title of one is \"Back to the future\" It was released in 1985. It was very innovative and impressive at the time. I remember that i have watched this movie four times. I think i\'m sure no one has ever seen this one. So if it is invented, i want to go to the past and the future. Because of i\'d like to correct the mistake of the past and i wonder how i live in the future. I know that it is impossible in reality. But someday, i believe that it will have invented. I wonder if i can live until then. Just i think.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I also hope that time machine

will be invented in the future. But  I don\'t think it\'s possible. hehehe...

~~May~~

There is something that does not yet exist but i want to see invented.

>> There is something that does not yet exist but I want to see the inventions.
It is a Timemachine. Do you know that?

>> It is a Time Machine. Do you know why?
The reason why i thought is the movie in 1985

>> The reason why I thought about it is because of the movie that I watched in 1985.
The title of one is \"Back to the future\" It was released in 1985.

>> The title of the movie is \"Back to the Future\".  It was released in 1985.

It was very innovative and impressive at the time.

>> It was very innovative and impressive at that time.
I remember that i have watched this movie four times.

>> Correct

I think i\'m sure no one has ever seen this one.

>> I think that no one had ever seen this movie.

So if it is invented, i want to go to the past and the future.

Because of i\'d like to correct the mistake of the past and i wonder how i live in the future.

>> So if it has invented, I want to go back in the past and go to future because I like to make things right.
 I know that it is impossible in reality. But someday, i believe that it will have invented.
>> I know that it is impossible to happen, but I believe that it is possible to invent.
I wonder if i can live until then. Just i think.

>> I wonder if I am still living at that time.

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