0110[homework] hi MAY

2019-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Q. Do you think men and women show their anger differently? A. I think everyone is different. I\'ve met a lot of men and women for over 40 years. Their anger can be a different way of expression, but I think loud and anger are similar to men and women. and There are many people who can\'t mind control. So They coudn\'t contain anger, break things and even kill. I think it\'s wise to talk away without getting angry as much as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for answering this question. You are right.

Everyone is really different. Everyone has different personalities.

Not only gender, but also ages of people has something to do with anger management.

Have a nice weekend to you! ^^

~~May~~

I think everyone is different. I\'ve met a lot of men and women for over 40 years.

Their anger can be a different way of expression, but I think loud and anger are similar to men and women.

>> Correct

and There are many people who can\'t mind control. So They coudn\'t contain anger, break things and even kill.

>> And there are many people who can\'t control their mind (or themselves) so they coudn\'t contain anger, break things and even kill.

I think it\'s wise to talk away without getting angry as much as possible.

>> I think it\'s wise to talk in a nice way without getting angry as much as possible.

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