0111 homework

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I\'m sure more important message is \'be happy with yourself\'.

>>I\'m sure that the most important message is \"be happy with yourself.\"

Losing weight could be important but getting stressful feeling is more harmful.

>>Losing weight could be important but having a stressful feeling is more harmful.

A freind of mine losed her weights a lot in the past, but she got anemia and constipation.

>>A friend of mine lost her weight a lot in the past, but she suffered from anemia and constipation.

And she\'s always thinking about her apperance even though she is beautiful.

>>And she\'s always thinking about her appearance even though she is beautiful. (correct sentence, misspelled \"appearance\")

She told me that she couldn\'t go outside without wearing makeup because she felt everyone was wathching her.

>>She told me that she couldn\'t go outside without wearing makeup because she felt everyone was looking at her.

I think the reason of her thinking is advices which she was told when she was young.

>>I think the reason of her thinking is advices which she was told when she was young.

She heard many advices when it comes to going on a diet.

>>Correct

She regrets that she losed her weight harshily because of her health.

>>She regrets that she lost her weight harshly because of her health.

On the other word, losing weight could affect him or her to lose their health.

>>In other words, losing weight in the wrong way could affect someone\'s\' health.

It could be very dangerous if they were young.

>>It could be very dangerous especially if they are young.

And the point is we don\'t have any rights to give an advice about her weights.

>>And the point is we don\'t have any right to give an advice about loosing weight.