0112 homework

Hello [이름]! Since your teacher is not around today, I will be taking over your class as well as checking your compositions. ^_^
~T. Irene~
Talk about three things you would like to accomplish for the next twelve months.
I didn\'t think about it but the frst one is improving my English skills until I\'m satisfied.

>>> Correct.
>>> I haven\'t thought about that yet but the first thing I want to accomplish is improving my English skills until I am satisfied. 
When I went volunteering program, I felt my English is quite nice but it\'s not enough.

>>> When I joined the volunteer program, I thought my English was quite nice but I wasn\'t enough.
So I\'ll make plans about improving my English after my work.
>>> Correct.
And I\'d like to lose my weights.
>>> I would also like to lose weight.
I\'ll lose 5 killograms in a year.
>>> I\'ll try to lose 5 kilograms in a year.
As you know, I have nothing to do with beauty.
>>> As you know, it has nothing to do with beauty.
I\'m not interested in \"decorating\" myself.
>>> Correct.
But losing weights is essential for my legs.
>>> But losing weight is essential for my legs.
So I\'ll regularly go to the pool!(I didn\'t go there today^^)
>>> Correct.
Last one is graduating my school and I\'ll ready for my future job.
>>> The last thing I want to accomplish is graduating from school and getting ready for my future job.
Actually, I don\'t choose my field.
>>> Actually, I haven\'t chosen any major yet.
So in 2019, I want to choose it and ready for it enough.
>>> So in 2019, I want to choose a course and prepare for it. 
I think I\'m diligent and living busy life.
>>> I think I\'m diligent enough while living a busy life.
So I guarantee that I could accomplish everything that I want!
>>> So I guarantee that I could accomplish everything I want!
I believe myself.
>>> I believe in myself.
 PS. I couldn\'t believe today is in 2019!
>>> Correct.
>>>  PS. I couldn\'t believe it\'s already 2019!
Thanks teacher in 2018 and 2019 too!
>>> Thank you teacher for our classes in 2018 and 2019!