[0114]homework
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Thanks for sharing [이름]! Yes. I really wonder what that book is. I will try to search. ^^
~~May~~
Yes, I like reading books. One of my hobbies is reading books.
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Because of the reading is the food of mind.
>> Reading is like feeding the mind.
I steadily reading books three books a month.
>> I read three books in a month.
The book which I recommended is called the name of \"The Art of War\".
>> The book that I like to recommend is \"The Art of War\".
I enjoyed this book very much.
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I tell you that no one has read this book.
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The book which I\'d like to recommend a book is related \"Fiancial Technology\".
>> The book that I recommend is related to financial technology.
You wonder if why i recommend this book.
>> You wonder why I recommend this book.
We have to read books in order to live well in the future.
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