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Hi [이름]! A great day to you! Thank you for catching up with your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

You gave awesome points on this one. But you focused solely on genetics. I also wanted to hear about your opinion with cybernetics and chemistry. ^ ^

No worries! Your genetics opinion will suffice; for now! ^ ^ It\'s also good that you learned things from your professor! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

Genetics will lead the field of medicine.

>>Correct

Because our biological information is in chromosomes.

>>Because our biological information is in our chromosomes. (DNA)

In other words, we could look for the reason of some deseases like cancer.

>>In other words, we could look for the reasons of some diseases like cancer.

And we could also find our genetic weak parts so we are able to be ready to diseases.

>>And we could also find our genetic weak parts which will  enable us to prevent the disease from occurring.

I was told from my professor that contemporary pills aren\'t fit with genetic diseases.

>>I was told by my professor that contemporary pills aren\'t effective with genetic diseases.

The most biggest reason is that present pills are made through diseases\' symptoms.

>>The biggest reason is that present pills are made through diseases\' symptoms.

So if we can make new medicines fitting with genetic factors, I think we could conquar all of the diseases.

>>So if we can make new medicines fitting with genetic factors, I think we could conquer all of the diseases.  (correct sentence misspelled \"conquer\")

However, viruses\' mutation is so fast so we should develop pills and medicines quickly than virus.

>>However, viruses\' mutation is so fast so we should develop pills and medicines faster than a virus.