0116 homework

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Thank you for your thoughts! A lot of people from your country are complaining about the yellow dust coming from China, but unfortunately; China\'s denying the allegation and said that it\'s not coming form them. Your government is doing so little about it, so yeah! I feel you and I totally agree with your plans! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

If I win the lottery, I will escape my country.

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>>If I win the lottery, I will flee from my country.

Because there is much yellow dust so I can\'t breath!

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I don\'t want to buy masks again.

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>>I\'m tired of buying and wearing mask every time it happens. 

I\'m easy to be infected by cold virus.

>>I am also prone to getting infected by cold virus.

When I was young, I got Pneumonia.

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It means my bronchial tubes are in weak condition.

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So I always worry about my health.

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Nowadays, we can\'t even see a building because there are much dust.

>>Nowadays, we can\'t even see a building because there is so much dust.  (dust is non countable noun, we use \"is\")

I know that lung cancer is hard to be healed completely.

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>>I know that lung cancer is hard to cure and recover from.

So I\'ll live near the Alps in Switzerland.

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I\'ll also build a building for me and enjoy my life.

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And I\'ll study about stocks and invest it.

>>And I\'ll study about stocks and I\'ll invest on it. 

I\'ll never waste my money so I\'ll invest some stable stocks.

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And I\'ll establish a foundation for women.

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I\'ll help victimes of sexual crimes, familiy violence and etc.

>>I\'ll help victims of sexual abuse, domestic violence and more. 

So I should win the lottery as soon as possible.

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But I don\'t believe that I could win the lottery so I\'ve never bought the lottery.

>>But I don\'t believe that I would win the lottery so I\'ve never bought a lottery ticket.