012.[Application for POSCO]

2010-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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012.[Application for POSCO] After that, I realized a Good accounting skills are very important in the Business. So, I attended a National Tax Service and Accounting Class 1 years ago during 10 months. And then I get a Certification of Tax Accounting. Nowaday I am in charge of Protecting&Security for National Oil Company Seosan Storage Base. KNOC(Korea National Oil Company) is government company, and I also realized that The Strong Government company will make Strong Nation. For that reason, I have dream that I want to join the National Company like a POSCO. So, I apply for the POSCO

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Hi [이름]!!   That was a very interesting comment about POSCO… You have enough qualifications so I think POSCO will give you a chance to be a part of their company..^^ See you in class!!   T. Shy   After that, I realized a Good accounting skills are very important in the Business >> After that, I realized that good accounting skills are very important in business So, I attended a National Tax Service and Accounting Class 1 years ago during 10 months. >> So, I attended a National Tax Service and Accounting Class 1 year ago for 10 months. And then I get a Certification of Tax Accounting.>> And then I got a Certification of Tax Accounting.Nowaday I am in charge of Protecting&Security for National Oil Company Seosan Storage Base >> Nowadays, I am in charge of Protection and Security for National Oil Company Seosan Storage Base KNOC(Korea National Oil Company) is government company, and I also realized that The Strong Government company will make Strong Nation.>> KNOC (Korea National Oil Company) is a government company, and I also realized that a strong government company will make a strong nation. For that reason, I have dream that I want to join the National Company like a POSCO>> For that reason, I have dreamed that I want to join a national company like POSCO

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