0121 homework

2019-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Q. How would you communicate if you had travelled to a country where its people don\'t know how to speak neither your language nor English? A. When i went on a trip to Vietnam with my family last December, it was like this way. We went on a free trip to the Hanoi of Vienam. There is no the people who could speak english, except for the hotel staff. Of course I couldn\'t speak Vietnamese. I was able to communicate with the hotel staff. When i was traveling downtown Hanoi, I used my smartphone to communicate. There is translation application, it\'s very available communication. We used Google maps for directions, Grab taxi for move, and translaion application for communication. My son and daughter said that we want to travel to a country where they can speak English well. I hope that. And so, We decided to go to Singapore next time.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing. I think you really had a nice trip to Vietnam.

Yes, sometimes it\'s a struggle to communicate with people who don\'t know English.

So you are very good and lucky because you can speak and understand English. ^^

~~May~~

When i went on a trip to Vietnam with my family last December, it was like this way. 

>> CORRECT
 We went on a free trip to the Hanoi of Vienam.

>> We went on a free trip to Hanoi, Vietnam.

There is no the people who could speak english, except for the hotel staff. 

>> No one could speak English except for the hotel staff. 
Of course I couldn\'t speak Vietnamese. I was able to communicate with the hotel staff. 

>> CORRECT
 When i was traveling downtown Hanoi, I used my smartphone to communicate.

>>  When I travelled to the downtown of Hanoi, I used my smartphone to communicate.

There is translation application, it\'s very available communication.

>> There is a translation application and it\'s very convenient.

We used Google maps for directions, Grab taxi for move, and translaion application for communication.

>> We used the Google map for directions, Grab for transportation, and translation application for communication.

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