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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing. I think you really had a nice trip to Vietnam.
Yes, sometimes it\'s a struggle to communicate with people who don\'t know English.
So you are very good and lucky because you can speak and understand English. ^^
~~May~~
When i went on a trip to Vietnam with my family last December, it was like this way.
>> CORRECT
We went on a free trip to the Hanoi of Vienam.
>> We went on a free trip to Hanoi, Vietnam.
There is no the people who could speak english, except for the hotel staff.
>> No one could speak English except for the hotel staff.
Of course I couldn\'t speak Vietnamese. I was able to communicate with the hotel staff.
>> CORRECT
When i was traveling downtown Hanoi, I used my smartphone to communicate.
>> When I travelled to the downtown of Hanoi, I used my smartphone to communicate.
There is translation application, it\'s very available communication.
>> There is a translation application and it\'s very convenient.
We used Google maps for directions, Grab taxi for move, and translaion application for communication.
>> We used the Google map for directions, Grab for transportation, and translation application for communication.
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