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Hi Sir [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m glad to know that you have dreamed

to become a teacher. Things will really change unexpectedly. Living your life happily

with your family is already a dream came true. See you tomorrow. ^^

~~May~~

When i was a child, l had big dreams.

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 Among dreams, I hoped that i want to be a teacher.

>> One of my dreams was to become a teacher.

But now, the dream has not come true.

>> But it didn\'t come true.

I had a dream until graduated the College.

>> I still have dreamed of it I graduated in college.

But the wall was very high.

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Now a day i have not given up to be teacher.

>> Each day, I have not given up to be teacher.

It\' too late now. But i will keep this dream and live forever.

Because having a dream is a great thing.

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Now my dream is live happily and for along time with my family.

>> Now my dream is just to live happily and to live longer with my family.

 The final goal is live in USA witn my family.

>> My final goal is to live in the USA with my family.

 I will try to come true.

>> I will try to make it true.

To come true, the first of all, i study English hard and exercise for my healthy.

>> To achieve this, first, I will study English hard and do exercise to become more healthy.

I never give up it for my dream.

>> I never give up it for my dream.