013.[Slogan for the KNOC]

013.[Slogan for the KNOC] The KNOC is a company name; Korea National Oil Company the Oil Storage Department of KNOC has finished their storage goal, and, We make strategy which we make money by using storaged oil & facility. So, I write some slogan below. [1]We keep the oil＇s perfume in our country. Now, we go to the world. [2]There is no time to stop, There is right time to go. [3]We don＇t stop, never, We＇ll stop when we have all oil of the world. [4]Today the first day, In my heart＇s Dark pearls will be light in the world.

Hello Min, Oh you’ve been so very creative in coming up with your slogans. Here are the possible corrections made. Hope it will help. Stay safe, Connie   013.[Slogan for the KNOC]The KNOC is a company name; Korea National Oil Company >> My company’s name is KNOC Korean National Oil Company. the Oil Storage Department of KNOC has finished their storage goal, >> This company has finished their storage goal.and, We make strategy which we make money by using storaged oil & facility. >> WE made a strategy to make money using the stored oil and different facilities.So, I write some slogan below. >> SO I wrote some slogans below.[1]We keep the oil＇s perfume in our country. Now, we go to the world. >>  WE want to keep the oil’s scent in our country, now we will go around the world.[2]There is no time to stop, There is right time to go. >> Today is not the time to stop instead it is time to keep going.[3]We don＇t stop, never, We＇ll stop when we have all oil of the world. >> NO chance to stop, not unless we have all the oil all over the world.[4]Today the first day, In my heart＇s Dark pearls will be light in the world. >> It is the first day and in my heart I believe that dark pearls will be the light of the world.