014.[Campus Outside]

2010-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 kate

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014.[Campus Outside] When you enter the campus you first see a great main gate called by Neo Renaissance. We have a great park in campus. So, may people think which seem like a disney land. I really agree with this opinion. There is a good scenary. There are many beautiful trees. There are going to spout the fountains. but, There was just Mountain 20 years ago. There has been established at 1990.

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Hi [이름]! Wow! I'm actually trying to imagine how the park looks like. I bet it really feels good and relaxing to walk in that park. Considering the nice scenery and watching the fountains. You should take a lot of pictures.       When you enter the campus you first see a great main gate called by Neo Renaissance. >>Upon entering the campus, you'll first see what is called by the Neo Renaissance as the "Great Main Gate"We have a great park in campus.>>We have a great park in the campus. So, may people think which seem like a disney land.>>People may think it's like Disney land I really agree with this opinion.>>correct There is a good scenary. There are many beautiful trees. >>correct There are going to spout the fountains.>>They are going to spout the fountains. but, There was just Mountain 20 years ago.>>The park used to be just a mountain 20 years ago. There has been established at 1990. >>It has been established at 1990.

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