015.[Teacher]

2010-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 kate

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015.[Teacher] I like a Social subject teacher who name is Mr. back when I was in middle school. He was very energetic and had a special think which different the other people. representative of Mr. back, it is his moto: Absolute Obedience. but, actually he loves democracy and he was left leaning people. anyway, It's not important whether he loves democracy or not.

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Hi [이름]! I also had several favorite teachers when I was in the middle school. I like teachers who makes a difficult topic easy to understand. Only few teachers has that talent. Don't you think?     I like a Social subject teacher who name is Mr. back when I was in middle school. >>I liked my Social subject teacher whose name is Mr. [Name] when I was in the middle school.He was very energetic and had a special think which different the other people.>>He was very energetic and his thoughts were different from other people. representative of Mr. back, it is his moto: Absolute Obedience.>>Mr. [Name] is known for his moto: Absolute Obedience. but, actually he loves democracy and he was left leaning people.>>but actually, he loves democracy which made people lean on him. anyway, It's not important whether he loves democracy or not. >>anyway, it's not important wether he loves democracy or not.  

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