015.[Teacher]
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015.[Teacher]
I like a Social subject teacher who name is Mr. back when I was in middle school.
He was very energetic and had a special think which different the other people.
representative of Mr. back, it is his moto: Absolute Obedience.
but, actually he loves democracy and he was left leaning people.
anyway, It's not important whether he loves democracy or not.
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Hi [이름]!
I also had several favorite teachers when I was in the middle school. I like teachers who makes a difficult topic easy to understand.
Only few teachers has that talent. Don't you think?
I like a Social subject teacher who name is Mr. back when I was in middle school.
>>I liked my Social subject teacher whose name is Mr. [Name] when I was in the middle school.He was very energetic and had a special think which different the other people.>>He was very energetic and his thoughts were different from other people.
representative of Mr. back, it is his moto: Absolute Obedience.>>Mr. [Name] is known for his moto: Absolute Obedience.
but, actually he loves democracy and he was left leaning people.>>but actually, he loves democracy which made people lean on him.
anyway, It's not important whether he loves democracy or not.
>>anyway, it's not important wether he loves democracy or not.
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