016.[Favorite place in school]
학생이 쓴 원문
016.[Favorite place in school]
Actually, when I was a student, I liked library, because, that have many books, computers, magazines, newspapers as so on. it is OK to speak one sentence that This is [Name] Bank
so, I was gathering in information with my friend. that reason, I liked the library more then any place.
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Hi [이름]!!
When I was in college I like going to the library, too especially if I have a lot of spare time…
I quite don’t get what you mean on this sentence: “it is OK to speak one sentence that This is [Name] Bank”… Can you explain it to me more?
See you in class!
T. Shy
Actually, when I was a student, I liked library, because, that have many books, computers, magazines, newspapers as so on.
>> Actually, when I was a student, I liked going to the library, because it has many books, computers, magazines, newspapers and so on.
so, I was gathering in information with my friend.
>> So, I was gathering information with my friend.
that reason, I liked the library more then any place.
>> For that reason, I liked the library more than any other place.
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