017.[Favorite Course]

2010-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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017.[Favorite Course] My major is management. I took a lot of business & information technology courses when I student, I hate english. so I avoid the english. but, recently, I am taking with foreigner by telephone. I am very satisfied. anyway, 3years ago. I like operation science. and now I also interest it still. but, I want to learn more the english in my life.

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Hello Min, Great job in coming up with this sentences. Here are some corrections and possible additional phrases. Hope it helps, Connie   017.[Favorite Course]My major is management. I took a lot of business & information technology courses when I student, >> My major is management, so I took a lot of business and information technology courses when I was a student.  I hate english. so I avoid the english. but, recently, I am taking with foreigner by telephone. >> I hated English before, so I avoided it, but recently, I’m a  having telephone class and I’m very satisfied.  am very satisfied. anyway, 3years ago. I like operation science. and now I also interest it still. but, I want to learn more the english in my life. >> Three years ago and until now, I like operation science; however I want to learn English more because I needed it in my life.     I love studying; my major is management so I took a lot of business and information technology courses . Before, I hated English so I avoided it, but recently, I’m a having telephone class and I’m very satisfied. Three years ago and until now, I like operation science; however I want to learn English more because I needed it in my life.  I believe that education never stops and it requires no age limit. So I’ll still try my best to continue  seeking  for  knowledge.  

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