01oct2024_ homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Are you or anyone you know allergic to any food? What happens if they eat that food accidentally?
answer:
I don\'t have an allergic to any food. I have an allergic other than food. like cat hair, pollen.
My nephew has a nut allergic. if he eat nut, he will get urticaria and his lips and esophagus will swelling
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Hello, Ms. [Name]! It must be tough having allergies because you will restricted from things even if you do not want to. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
I don\'t have an allergic to any food.
>>I don\'t have an allergy to any food.
I have an allergy other than food. like cat hair, pollen.
>>I have an allergy to other things like cat fur and pollen.
My nephew has a nut allergic.
My nephew has a nut allergic.
>>My nephew has a nut allergy.
if he eat nut, he will get urticaria and his lips and esophagus will swelling
>>If he eats nuts, he will get hives and his lips and esophagus will swell.
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