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2011-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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My baby likes the toy cars. Today we went to Home plus. My son wanted to ride a cart shaped car. But it young for him to ride it. But I finally took him a ride because he cried loudly. I decided to buy him a Radio Flyer - the toy children could ride it. So I surfed web site to buy it. But It so expensive. I try to reduse my living expense.

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Hello there, Thank you for your composition. I think you really love your baby so much. I can see how you are trying your best to be a great Mom. See you later!   My baby likes the toy cars.  >>My baby likes toy cars.Today we went to Home Plus.  >>Correct My son wanted to ride a cart shaped car. >>CorrectBut it young for him to ride it.  >> But he is still young to ride it. But I finally took him a ride because he cried loudly. >>But I finally let him ride because he cried loudly.  I decided to buy him a Radio Flyer - the toy children could ride it. >> I decided to buy him a Radio Flyer - the toy which children could ride it.  So I surfed web site to buy it.  >>So I surfed the web to buy it.But It so expensive. >>But it is so expensive.  I try to reduse my living expense. >>I try to reduce my living expenses.

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