02-07
학생이 쓴 원문
My baby likes the toy cars.
Today we went to Home plus. My son wanted to ride a cart shaped car.
But it young for him to ride it. But I finally took him a ride
because he cried loudly. I decided to buy him a Radio Flyer - the toy children could ride it. So I surfed web site to buy it.
But It so expensive. I try to reduse my living expense.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Thank you for your composition. I think you really love your baby so much. I can see how you are trying your best to be a great Mom.
See you later!
My baby likes the toy cars.
>>My baby likes toy cars.Today we went to Home Plus.
>>Correct
My son wanted to ride a cart shaped car.
>>CorrectBut it young for him to ride it.
>> But he is still young to ride it.
But I finally took him a ride because he cried loudly.
>>But I finally let him ride because he cried loudly.
I decided to buy him a Radio Flyer - the toy children could ride it.
>> I decided to buy him a Radio Flyer - the toy which children could ride it.
So I surfed web site to buy it.
>>So I surfed the web to buy it.But It so expensive.
>>But it is so expensive.
I try to reduse my living expense.
>>I try to reduce my living expenses.
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