02.18 What joy do you find in helping patients?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually I don’t have an experience of helping patients yet. Because I am still a student.
But I guess I can help them to get over the situation.
And I’m sure that when I look my patients get over the situation in a hospital, it would be my pleasure.
helping patients is not easy but it might make me feel why I have to live and what I can do for them.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
I am glad to see you here on the composition site. In the future, you will help patients overcome their sickness and improve their health. You will impact their lvies in such a way where a stranger gives ample care and concern to someone weak. That is priceless.
I hope to see you again [이름]n. Again, much thanks for answering my question today through this composition.
Take care.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But I guess I can help them to get over the situation.
>> Correct!
And I’m sure that when I look my patients get over the situation in a hospital, it would be my pleasure.
>> And I’m sure that when I look at my patients getting over the situation in a hospital, it would be my pleasure.
helping patients is not easy but it might make me feel why I have to live and what I can do for them.
helping patients is not easy but it might make me feel why I have to live and what I can do for them.
>> Correct!
Or: Helping (CAPITAL LETTER H)
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