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2019-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. vault 2. clumsy 3. overhead 4. lush greenery 5. same age group or different age group 1. Volts of this vault rusted out over vast area. 2. Well, the best word which I can say to your style is clumsy. Or maybe clumsy is too good. Please burn that dreadful pineapple shirt up. 3. That bee is flying overhead almost 30 minutes but, nobody cares about it. 4. I think I\'m supposed to divorce. My wife started to want lush greenery in my garden. 5. My grandfather and I are in very different age group but we hit it off well.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. vault
2. clumsy
3. overhead
4. lush greenery
5. same age group or different age group

1. Volts of this vault rusted out over vast area.
>> A large area of this vault has rusted out.

2. Well, the best word which I can say to your style is clumsy. Or maybe clumsy is too good. Please burn that dreadful pineapple shirt up.
>> Well, the best term to describe your style is clumsy or maybe that\'s too good a word. Please burn that dreadful pineapple shirt up.

3. That bee is flying overhead almost 30 minutes but, nobody cares about it.
>> That bee is flying overhead for almost 30 minutes but, no one cares about it.

4. I think I\'m supposed to divorce. My wife started to want lush greenery in my garden.
>> I\'m thinking about getting a divorce. My wife started to want a lush greenery in my garden.

5. My grandfather and I are in very different age group but we hit it off well.

>> correct

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