02-20
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. argue with
2. to my way of thinking
3. hence
4. inevitable
5. considering
1. I don\'t want to argue with you but, you should learn the respect.
>> I don\'t want to argue with you, but you should learn how to respect people.
2. To my way of thinking, we need more lumbers.
>> correct
3. Hence she won this prize rather than you. Get it?
>> correct
4. She said I\'m an inevitable child. Can you believe it? Is that a proper sentence came from my mother\'s mouth?
>> My mother said that it was inevitable for her to get pregnant, and I was the result of that pregnancy. Can you believe that came out from my mother\'s mouth?
5. Concidering your attitudes to your mom, well, you\'re supposed to appreciate that she didn\'t abandon you yet.
>> Considering your awful behavior toward your mom, well, you should appreciate that she hasn\'t abandon you yet.
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